Friday, March 07, 2008

One Single Impression - Change


My breath held
as shinken blade dances.
A life is changed

4 comments:

SandyCarlson said...

This opens up a range of thoughts. Well done. Thanks for joining in.
Writing in Faith: Poems

Leatherdykeuk said...

Thank you Sandy :)

Crafty Green Poet said...

excellent, sets up a scenario in the readers mind

Leatherdykeuk said...

Thank you, CGP :)